Necron99 -
Great read. Reminds me very much of the satirical writing of the British Sci Fi author John Brunner (The Jagged Orbit, Stand on Zanzibar, The Sheep Look Up) from the early 1970's. Not well known but very competent, humorous yet acerbic, tautly woven and masterful within that genre. His character sketches are extremely rich and carefully drawn, verging on kaleidoscopic casts of characters (heavily ironic and very funny) within a Sci Fi genre where genuine caustic humor is a great rarity.
Your style is a close match for his. Needless to say his writing from 35+ years ago is not dated in the least - it perfectly anticipates the dystopia you also describe. Unfortunately much of his work is out of print but you can still pick easily up the above novels on Amazon used. If you still write or read this genre, he's the best of the lot.
http://www.sfreviews.net/jaggedorbit.html
http://www.eyrie.org/~eagle/reviews/books/1-85798-836-1.html
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